When looking through the footage, I noticed that there were areas that could use a smoother transition or there needed to be something in the spot.
One shot I did, was for the point between LI leaving the side of the bed and V coughing. It was just LI walking off to the side of the room.
Another was showing LI walking towards the bathroom in the hallway, to intercut during the beginning of the bathroom. This would show what LI is doing while V is in the bathroom and she isn't forgotten. It can also slightly draw out suspense because of how slowly she walks to the bathroom.
For the vase shots, I found a spot that has a raised place, but not much space behind it to move the camera back. This spot is also right next to the front door, which could be opened and shown the light entering and leaving. That gave a new visual that showed her entering the house (and then leaving at the end of the film). Now the shot shows her shoulders up and hair, rather than nothing at all.
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